Modern "hook up" culture might increase attempts of sexual assault because when people are young and under the age to drink then they go to a party or something and do it anyway things can happen. Most teens have not drank alcohol before and they don't know their limits so when they do drink and a pretty girl is around their hormones start going crazy then they try to hook up with one of them and if the girl isn't on the same page that's where sexual assault can come in.
Strong ideas here, you make some really great points. Make sure you are keeping track of your punctuation errors though, you're missing a few commas in a couple of your sentences. (Ex.Most teens have not drank before and they don't know their limits, so when they do drink...)
Modern hook up culture might increase attempts of sexual assault. The modern hook up culture we have is caused by parents who don't care, and children who are uneducated. "Parents still turn a blind eye to booze". says Brynn O'Connor. Students don't follow affirmative consent. Even though hooking up may lead to sexual assault, it is a different story if no alcohol or drugs are used. If there is consent on both sides, WHILE SOBER, there isn't an issue. But while you're under the influence you legally can't give consent.
You make many strong points and your use of the quote from the article was a great way to back up your argument. Your sentences are a little choppy, I would encourage you to work on combining them to make your paragraphs flow more. Also, you need to give your quote more of an introduction instead of just plopping it into your paragraph.
Modern hook up culture increased the attempts of sexual assault because its easier for teens to hook up and get together without having parent approval. Alcohol is also easy for a teen to possess. People now are beginning to come forward more and express these issues.
You made some great points here, I would have loved to read more about them. You need to work on explaining your ideas more so your responses aren't so vague.
In today's society millennial's like to party, there was and still are parties in today's age. Usually when there is a party there's a lot of people involved and everyone is getting under the influence of alcohol. In today's society 40% of women or men experienced their first rape before the age of 18, in the article "Boys will be boys?" by Samantha Schmidt the school Kavanaugh attended said "It becomes this mash of hormones, sweat and alcohol in some Montgomery County basements," this shows that the men and women going to this party already had the wrong intent going in. Although this case was almost 35 years ago you cannot give the court a valuable accusation that Kavanaugh sexually harassed you because there is no factual evidence on a criminal justice stand point.
You did a great job including and introducing the quote you chose, it supported your claim well. Your ideas are a little disconnected though, work on making sure your sentences and ideas flow more.
In this modern "hook up" culture things can increase in the amount of sexual assault because you could be drunk or not in the right state of mind. I believe that if you are not all there from drugs or alcohol you can do a lot of stupid things. When teens throw party's most of the time there is drugs or alcohol involved. These factors bring in to perspective that if there are girls and guys at this party something may not go right and a girl may be sexually assaulted.
You make some great points here, but make sure you use evidence from the article to back up your claims. Also, make sure you explain your ideas further.
Modern "hook up" culture can lead to sexual assault but does not lead to an increase. Sexual assault occurs everyday involving people young and old. It is not just teens who commit the crime but adults too.
This was an interesting take on the prompt and I would have liked to read more about it. Make sure you explain your ideas more.
Modern hook up culture can be damaging with young kids because of the increased sexual tensions between them. The kids involved in this culture are just being introduced to this area of life and don't have an idea of when to stop advancing and leave the other alone, and when you add drinking to the mix it can quickly get out of hand. These young people with their minds clouded from drinking can make bad decisions and there is no way to prevent some of these things from happening. Their hormones are very powerful and make it hard to judge right and wrong in their actions.
Your response was very well thought out and you make many good points. Make sure you use evidence from the article to support your ideas.
The hookup culture in today's world is so much more different than 30 years ago. Sure there is some similarities but i feel in today's world there a lot more sexual assaults because of the teens think its okay. There is more underage drinking and drug use that probably isn't a good factor with this also.
You make some good points, but you need to explain your thoughts more. How is today's hook up culture different than how it was 30 years ago? There were a few grammar errors as well, make sure you proof read your work.
"Hook up" culture can be looked at as the main reason why rape happens at such a young age. To feel accepted in the high school youth, many people have sex at a young age to feel "popular." Rape that occurred in high school in the 80's and is now being brought up in 2018 should not be seen as something that should ruin Kavanaugh's reputation. 35 years has passed since the women,Cheryl O'Conner, could have told someone, but she decided to tell the public what "happened" at a party 35 years prior. To anyone that thinks about what happened in a intelligent manner, Kavanaugh is 100% not guilty and is having his career shattered by a women accusing him of a crime she should of spoke of after it occurred. The article states that nearly 40% of all rapes occur before the age of 18. With this statistic we see that rape in high school is more common then what we would think. And do to the fact most rapes occur when alcohol is involved, the final solution we should take a look at as a society is limiting the use of alcohol for minors.
You make a many strong points in your response and it is clear that this current event is something interests you. There is a slight disconnect between your address of the Kavanaugh case and students in high school drinking, make sure to flesh out your ideas completely.
The modern hook up culture increases attempts of sexual assault.By teens going to parties and showing off there bodies on social media a way they shouldn't be but either way without the partying it could still happen any girls of any age so either way its not okay they need to get the situation figured out.
You make an interesting point about social media that many students haven't discussed yet. Your ideas are a little disconnected though, make sure to explain your thoughts more.
The modern hook up culture increase attempts of sexual assault by Samantha Schmidt. In the text, it shows teens has been taught that attempted sexual assault between teen is a crime. For example, of women who say they have been raped, more than 40 percent experienced their first raped before age 18. One of the girl who named Beverly Dempsey thought all the parties she didn't go to because she feared that she would be struck alone in a room with a guy she didn't know during high school.
Great use of the article to support your ideas. Make sure you write more about your own thoughts and explain them more.
The modern hook up culture today can cause more sexual assualt along with rape kids today think it is OK to take advantage of messed up girls which is not true at all we as men should be more respectful and help girls like that.
You make a good point about making sure to help those who cannot help themselves. However, your response seems a little rushed and lacks a lot of punctuation. Make sure to take your time and proofread your work.